Golden Destination

I set you homework on Thursday based on the image and instructions given on The Golden Destination.  I explained to you that it didn’t need to be in neat because we would edit it and copy it up, but that it would need to be very carefully though out.  Vary sentence length for impact and it is absolutely vital that you scan for patterns to make sure that you are effectively varying your vocabulary.  Think about really working with the mind’s eye to enable your reader to get a clear picture of your destination.